The Videos
The First version ends on the tape made E4 logo this shows the artistic intent of the ident.
The Second video has an alternate ending where the E4 logo shows up to re-a-firm the brand and make sure the target audience knows what channel they are watching.
The Feedback
Genre and Audience
My feedback comes from people aged between 14 and 20 which is E4's specific target market. 87.50% of the people questioned said that they watched E4 regularly.
Content and Narrative
My film functions as a stop motion experiment rather than a short story.
Style
The short is experimental.
Characters, quality of production and development
I initially made a short demo expressing the technique which was popular. When it came to the actual production me and a teacher had a difference of opinion and two different versions were cut with alternate endings and music.
Technical quality, Frame rate, Movement
People stated that the animation was really smooth. This was because I took twice the recormended photos and made my shot work on 24 photos a second. Its a common stable of stop motion to shoot at 12 frames a second however, I felt like I wanted to stand apart from the crowd. Just kidding, I took way too many photos but couldn't cut it down without spoiling the effect.
Aesthetic Qualities ( Mise-en-scene Ect )
People seemed to really like the look of my short; feedback was a really strong one for the alternative analog set dressing.
Creative Qualities ( Imagination and Flair )
I think the creative style is a little abstract and obscure. People in my questionnnaire seemed really impressed
Jonny,
ReplyDeleteI stand by my decision to get you to add the logo to the animation and I actually think it allows you to meet the brief more explicitly as it states you must include the logo (which I do not think is clear enough on version 1).
I have awarded a distinction for your animation and the level of detail you have gone to is fab. Well done.
EllieB